Friday, October 6, 2006

Do You Love Me Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

do you love me now I'm choking on a drug
do you love me now all i want is just a hug
do you love me now I'm cutting for the pain
do you love me now I'm drying up the stain
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Evy Moore
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Leo Lopes 09 October 2006

Hey this is a well written piece of work... I liked the honesty about it and the thing that makes it so frightening are the unspoken words.. things that are too vivid 4 poems... Peace to you my friend LL

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Amelie Anonymous 07 October 2006

Wow, that was really good. I loved it.

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Catastrophe King 06 October 2006

Your words frightens..... Do not pick the knife... I suggest you use your talented words - they can kill.... beleive me they have the power to kill.... you write beautifully! ! ! I like the style of expression, the message is delivered, undoubtedly! I could not help anything less than a 10 here, it deserved a little more though!

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