Do you know who I am?
I am the dream you have not fulfilled
I am the nightmare you cant face
I am the speech you cant complete
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you are in deed a very talented poet. This was a beautiful piece of heartfelt poetry if there ever was.
... and there was me thinking of you primarily as an unusually talented poet.... t x
Awesome subject matter...Eloquently delivered...Stunning close-out. Alison, you continue to impress as a solid, diversified poet on PH.Structurally, crisp, yet silk-smooth, and always innovative...You, young lady...DO ROCK! F J R
Alison, great write here. You helped set my potential free as you well know. I loved this. Thanks for sharing it. David
Reminds me of Emily Dickenson's - I dwell in possibility... Great thoughts interwoven in this. Love...TO
Beautiful Alison, the imagery in this was so dramatic I could see it happening as I read! A great poem... HG: -) xx
This is very powerful writing Alison. Great imagery from top to bottom with an effective and engrossing flow of meaning from start to very fine finish. Excellent stuff. xx jim