Thursday, September 3, 2015

Do You Know What I Going Through? Comments

Rating: 4.5

My mind and body is drenched in a pit,
Where even sunlight dare not to reach,
Narrow minds have blocked everything
Leaving us in the clouds of darkness
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Rajan T Renganathan
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 November 2020

Which promise of God....which god u like tell them pl do they fulfill?

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Nosheen Irfan 14 January 2019

The agony and struggle of a refugee is depicted with a depth of feeling. A thought-provoking write. A must-read.

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Prabir Gayen 29 November 2018

Beautiful poem with poetic diction....................thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2018

We are born with our fate to flee.....pragmatic expression! A magnificent piece of poetry! (10)

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 November 2015

Survival of the fitters! With the ways of life. Nice work.

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Valsa George 15 September 2015

The dark despair engulfing the mind of a refugee is captured here with empathy! In the time of a refugee influx when we watch through TV the agony and struggles of the refugees fleeing from West Asian countries, this is a timely write! Welcome to poem hunter, Rajan!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2015

Wonderful imagery. So nicely and aptly depicted. Beautiful poem. ....10

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Sanjukta Nag 09 September 2015

The state of mind of a refugee is expressed so brilliantly. astounding work. thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 03 September 2015

A wonderful poem, Rajan

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2015

Great tribute to innocent people.....................10

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