My mind and body is drenched in a pit,
Where even sunlight dare not to reach,
Narrow minds have blocked everything
Leaving us in the clouds of darkness
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The agony and struggle of a refugee is depicted with a depth of feeling. A thought-provoking write. A must-read.
Beautiful poem with poetic diction....................thanks
We are born with our fate to flee.....pragmatic expression! A magnificent piece of poetry! (10)
Survival of the fitters! With the ways of life. Nice work.
The dark despair engulfing the mind of a refugee is captured here with empathy! In the time of a refugee influx when we watch through TV the agony and struggles of the refugees fleeing from West Asian countries, this is a timely write! Welcome to poem hunter, Rajan!
Wonderful imagery. So nicely and aptly depicted. Beautiful poem. ....10
The state of mind of a refugee is expressed so brilliantly. astounding work. thank you.
Which promise of God....which god u like tell them pl do they fulfill?