do you know me,
like you say you do,
or is it a popular beleif,
your friend told you
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Your poems impress me and move me. Wonderful pace and lyrical balance. You have a good ear and inward eye. Keep on writing.
I like this poem, it's good. The only constructive critisism I have for you is that there are quite a few spelling and grammer mistakes you should edit out but besides that I like it.