Friday, July 31, 2009

Do You Know How You Make Me Feel? Comments

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Do you know how you make me feel?
Whenever you're near, you make me reel!
Whenever you're near, I feel more real!
Do you know how you make me feel? !
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Lorena Cruz 03 August 2009

it's really wierd everytime you write poems about love.. You write poems for a reason.. and I can't actually see where you get those intense lines coz' I know you don't have time for love this time..

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Nashy Lamen 02 August 2009

Does she know how you make her feel? Is the feeling you feel really real, Does your heart thump, is that what you feel? Do you think you know what you feel? ? hahahaha... Just kidding... AGAIN... anyway... I like this poem... Very 'do you know how you make me feel' thing... hahahha.. Nice flow with immense and strong emotions... I never knew someone would make you feel the way you feel right now... hahaha... Continue such marvelous pieces of poetry! ... WOW that was big..

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Julia Pascual 01 August 2009

wow.. a really intense and promising poem.. hmm.. i think you already have an inspiration.. who might that be? ? =)

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