Friday, August 24, 2012

Do You Know? Comments

Rating: 4.5

No matter how sad you are feeling right now
There is someone feeling just... so much sadder
This cannot heal your pain
But, It can make you aware that....
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Lyn Paul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 March 2020

There is no perfect life No amount of love or money.....so true. A beautiful poem with nice theme is well executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 March 2016

Sadness! You will surely get through this pain one day. Nice work.

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Owain Glyn 16 February 2013

Your poetry has an awful lot of reality in it.

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Unwritten Soul 25 August 2012

Loved it....you are right! when we think we are worst but there are many people have unlucky days more than us...we should be thankful..i like you voicing the positive message, a gem to shine need to share not to keep in the dark! _Unwritten Soul

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Eindaray Kyaw 25 August 2012

A stream of courage in your poem boost the others confidence! ! Nice! ! ! ! ! Keep it up!

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Romeo Della Valle 24 August 2012

Wow! This is a deep and thought provoking write that clearly shows your poetic talent and potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City!

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