Do you know the stories I hear?
One is beaten and the other dies there.
Do you know the things I fear?
A list of shameful claims people prefer not to name.
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this is a great poem, love how you have structured this keep it up i hope to read more new pieces
I truly love your poem! You write amazingly! Please do continue writing and post more of your poems. I liked your use of several rhetorical questions, I believe it does add a good touch to the flow of the poem, especially when put together with how you've made use of a good range of simple and complex vocabulary
Do you know how moving your words are and how you draw us all in. Pain put together with such power and strength once again.