Friday, January 6, 2012

Do You Know? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Do you know the stories I hear?
One is beaten and the other dies there.
Do you know the things I fear?
A list of shameful claims people prefer not to name.
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Karoliena Somura
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Lyn Paul 03 December 2012

Do you know how moving your words are and how you draw us all in. Pain put together with such power and strength once again.

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Kelvin Owusu 11 September 2012

this is a great poem, love how you have structured this keep it up i hope to read more new pieces

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Locura Alaam 08 June 2012

I truly love your poem! You write amazingly! Please do continue writing and post more of your poems. I liked your use of several rhetorical questions, I believe it does add a good touch to the flow of the poem, especially when put together with how you've made use of a good range of simple and complex vocabulary

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