Friday, September 11, 2009

Do You Feel The Same Comments

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what am gonna do
when I want to stay
will you let me wait
or let me free?
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lady grace
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Anjali Sinha 22 September 2009

Meaningful questions Did you get your answers? good write........ -10 anjali

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

Thank you..................

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 September 2009

meaningful and touching... expressed heartily... Who is he, redlepz? nice thoughts...sweet feelings 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Eyan Desir 13 September 2009

I think it's good poetry this makes one ponder.. and poetry is about making the reader think so the author did well

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Akram Awadat 13 September 2009

lovely poem, i like it thanks a lot

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Anand Madhukar 13 September 2009

A softly sentimental write, tender and true.

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Rafique Farooqi 12 September 2009

It is very tender write, you want your love stable, and persistent, ...........but it is fragile we must take care of fragile emotions.......

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

what am gonna do if you make me weep can I tell you that I was hurt? ..........i wonaa going to make happy all the way so long you are with me all the way. feel at home and when in trouble... this is beautiful poem and i loved to the very extent....10 read mine come home....homebound.... no separate ways..

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Surya . 11 September 2009

fine question and beautiful poem. thanx for sharing.full marx for you. surya

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Nikunj Sharma 11 September 2009

Short, sweet, realistic, very appealing....good poem

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Joseph Poewhit 11 September 2009

Life is like a goldfish bowl. We bump into each other all the time.

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Raj Arumugam 11 September 2009

a lovely and fresh lyric

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