what am gonna do
when I want to stay
will you let me wait
or let me free?
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meaningful and touching... expressed heartily... Who is he, redlepz? nice thoughts...sweet feelings 10+++ lovelots, Maia
I think it's good poetry this makes one ponder.. and poetry is about making the reader think so the author did well
It is very tender write, you want your love stable, and persistent, ...........but it is fragile we must take care of fragile emotions.......
what am gonna do if you make me weep can I tell you that I was hurt? ..........i wonaa going to make happy all the way so long you are with me all the way. feel at home and when in trouble... this is beautiful poem and i loved to the very extent....10 read mine come home....homebound.... no separate ways..
fine question and beautiful poem. thanx for sharing.full marx for you. surya
Life is like a goldfish bowl. We bump into each other all the time.
Meaningful questions Did you get your answers? good write........ -10 anjali