Thursday, May 28, 2009

Do You Feel It? Comments

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Do you feel it?
Pulsing through your skin and bones
the energy that burns in the wires you are made of
radiating through your eyes.
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Kristen Brewster
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Ronny Self 29 May 2009

I like your second to last line 'A safe haven and a turning point'. Finding somewhere safe is important for everyone. Another well written piece. I'm glad I found it.

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