Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Do You Ever Think Of Me? Comments

Rating: 3.5

The misty path along the pond
Brings me peace when all feels wrong
I speak to the moon, of which I'm fond
While breathing deep, I must be strong
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Nicole Silvia
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David Beckham 05 January 2013

Pause, release and move on. The motion through this poem is quite stylistic. As you grin out your expressions so do I engage with your thought. Quite charming in flow structure and elegantly different. Keep writing. TFS.10/10

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