Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Do You Care For A Smoke? Comments

Rating: 3.0

I lit a Cuban cigar.
It pierced darkness with a glow.
Lips held it tight with a munch.
Facial muscles strained turning blue.
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Satheesan Rangorath
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Kesav Easwaran 04 August 2008

whether we care or not a smoke really scares...the phrase 'a hole in sky burn clouds' stands beautiful...the cloud like suspended smoke rings! a diversified write from satheesan and a good one in that...ten grade

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Chitra - 02 August 2008

wonderfully expressed, a strong pint made here

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Elappulli, Palakkad, Kerala, India
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