day and night i can see you there
light it up and breath it in.
take it in for its your life
it controls you
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Nice poem I really like it. I know how that can feel...my mom and I now are trying to fix things between us..Great writing keep up the good work.
Good for you, U.S. I was also this kind of mom...my son is 23 now and he finally has said these things to me. It helps. We're healing our relationship a little every day. Tell anyone who will listen to you...and keep writing. I know how it can save a life. Hugs.
If that is the worse problem you have with you mom you are a very lucky girl