Thursday, January 1, 2009

Do You Believe Me? * Comments

Rating: 4.7

I drank a little too much,
The rum has a strong punch,
I don’t understand why,
Didn’t you say stop?
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Melissa Ramey 06 June 2009

Very intense....But very true. People oh so ignorant do this stuff every day Why cant there just be men and women in one room without anything happening. Im very honored that you'd read my poems! ! Your a very good poet and if so you may be a professional poet one day. -Melissa

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Sierra Love 09 January 2009

Wow, I really love this poem. I can't say I know how you feel, because truefully I don't. I can say I understand where you are coming from though. Something like this happened to me...only it was an older cousin who I had been really close with and trusted alot when I was younger. I really can feel the emotion in your words. I do believe you.

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Stacey Watts 01 January 2009

You know I am not sure what to say. It is so heart wrenching and I do believe you. I am just hoping you will e-mail me and say no Stacey it was just creative writing or a story. Some how I am not sure you will. You are very brave. There is stuff in my life my own mother does not believe happened. I know where you are coming from. I am giving you a 10.

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Chris Newlash 01 January 2009

Of course i do... very powerful poem, i'm glad you wrote it.

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