Do You Believe In Imagination? Comments

So glad to see that you do enjoy writing poetry. Over all this is a well written poem and yet it could benefit from a few spelling, grammar, and tense tweaks. If unsure, there is a way to tell when something is wrong. Copy and paste into Microsoft Word and let spellcheck help you. Don’t overlook the grammar check. I do hope that you also read good poetry; it is the only way to hone your talent. Read mine –How Long is Forever— Adeline