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an excellent poem and a wonderful soul...10+++

the poem will kindle readers' hearts. shan

Where is Jamuna river please? I love this poem. Your write adorable poetry. Thanks for sharing to us.

You make me fall in love with your musical culture. Keep up this spirit of life in love...

roaming around with flute? ...grace

nice and nice :) 10..

nice and simple. it reminded me of Bangladesh. Jamuna river, Kodom Phool, flute..... so nice and terrific.

Let me ask you, my dear...Do you have a flute? Forget Kadam tree or Jamuna river....This net space is enough for you to unwind your thoughts so beautifully and so precisely....Wonderful is your thought process and wonderful is your capacity to express that in few words....A rare talent...10++...as always..Luv - Brishti

Very beautiful. Stunning.

brief content filled and rejoiceful............see my 10 ++

I dont have a flute sorry...

i can see it fingers caressing the flute with such vibrancy. nice work.

Utmost economy of words.

Transformation of thought in musical sound, in the absence of the word, for vibration, and vibration for recomposing the word...the essence of love..10+

quite a mind boggler.

Ah A melody of flute and promise with fingers brilliantly moving to the composition. 10 Karin Anderson

oh is is Lord Krishna as always enlightens humanity by sweet song through jis flue, wonderful, yet heart reveling,10++, thanks for sharing

a hint on nature's music

a lovely sweet poem...10++++

nice, , , , love the form.