Monday, May 3, 2010

Do You? Comments

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Think of me when your alone at night
Ever dream about us when your day isn't going right
Do you?
Get excited thinking about the love me make
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Robin Bennett 19 July 2012

Another great write. I love the banter back and forth. Always enjoy that in a poem, obviously there is no answer, but I find it a great technique in writing when used correctly! You pulled it off perfectly. Bravo. -Robin xoxo

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