Monday, August 25, 2008

Do You Comments

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Do you feel my heart beat when it races when I see you?

Do you smile like crazy as I do because I waited the whole day to see you and now I've finally gotten the chance to?
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Jessica Elizondo
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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

Even though the questions you're asking here have been asked before, you strung them together with beauty and elegance. I am certain that 'he' does, even if he isn't known to you as of yet. Remember dear friend, look before you leap as not all three letter words are 'I Love You'. Be Well Young Princess, Nate

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Serenity Prayer 26 August 2008

you dont sound pathedic. great poem. very sad, but beautifully written. great job.

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