I think this is a very good poem. it seems to flow and everyone can realate.. if i may give some advise.. you should read over your poems or put the on 'word' first to check your spelling. and try to be more consistant in your poems of if you choose to type You as -u then try to do that through out the poem other wise very good keep it up and don't worry.. i do the same thing :) ..
Yours truly
Scarred
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I think this is a very good poem. it seems to flow and everyone can realate.. if i may give some advise.. you should read over your poems or put the on 'word' first to check your spelling. and try to be more consistant in your poems of if you choose to type You as -u then try to do that through out the poem other wise very good keep it up and don't worry.. i do the same thing :) .. Yours truly Scarred