Thursday, June 11, 2009

Do Ya Feel Me? ? Comments

Rating: 5.0

are ya catchin' what i'm throwin'?
are ya reapin' what i'm sewin'?
are ya sniffin' what i'm blowin'?
are ya smokin' what i'm growin'?
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lil miss
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Tesla Blackburn 17 June 2009

I so agree with you. We poet's are just real! I feel you completely.

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John Lyday 16 June 2009

Kind of reminds me of when I was a teenager. Except I only wrote one poem; sent it into high times and they rejected it. Good Rhyme. Good Poem.

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Wow, Lil miss, that was tight. your rhyming skills are crazy! Have you ever considered writing for rappers? or rapping yourself? Good job.

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Catrina Heart 11 June 2009

Oh! great internal and end rhymes crafted too with fine diction............Thanks.......10

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