Those tiny moths
that are
in their dimension
just thoughts.....
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Thank you Mary and Uriah. Always appreciate your presence and your input. I notice that Matthew has quickly removed his comments, probably afraid he will get his bottom spanked by Collette again. Or? H
H, I really enjoy this poem, a positive encouragement for poets to write. May we all listen.
Very nice one Herbert. Also, great advice. Many people are glad you 'do write it down'. Sincerely, Mary
Matthew, I am not claiming to be a professional poet. I write for my enjoyment and for that of others. So, I probably do not need to be critiqued on whatever I post. If you want to get an idea of my work do what respected critics like Kelly Vinal and Rich Hanson have done: Read all my poems. If you then do not find anything good to say I will listen. H
I do enjoy your work Herbert.....there are times where I wuestion BUT I still do it creatively. I enjoyed this and as Mary said I'm glad you write it down!