Wednesday, April 17, 2013
Do We Really Know? Comments
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Do we really know the messages in our mother's eyes?
Or we just stare at them to say lies?
We think she doesn't understand our lies, but remember, she is so wise
She knows that we lie, she does!
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Nader Baheri
20 April 2013
i like the structures you are using in your poems. and this is one of your great poems with wonderful structures and also meaning and theme.i put it second in the list.~nb
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7/20/2025 12:31:57 PM # 1.0.0
I liked the words and the style of your poem. Using the wisdom and all seeing eye of a mother as a metaphor. Nicely done.