Do We? ... Poem by Annette Aitken

Do We? ...

Rating: 5.0


Do we..?

Do we ever really know who is,
good,
bad,
dangerous?
We can never truly know anyone
for no one really knows themselves.
As humans, we have the capability
to react to extreme situations,
sometimes erratic, or so unpredictable
that we surprise even ourselves.
The length's we can push ourselves to.
Repressed memories, distorted
or even manipulated one's
can hide in our cerebel cortex
as if to walk right through the
belly of the beast.
but,
as concrete can once again
turn to sand
with the perfect recipe of
self-indulgence,
it can be truly, amazing, what we
can achieve when we put our
minds to it.


by
A.A.17

Sunday, April 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 17 April 2017

Love the title, Annette. You are so very clever with choosing titles that draw the reader in. We can never truly know anyone for no one really knows themselves. There is so much truth in this thought, and the second line is almost a surprise turn in your thoughts, an unanticipated spike of introspection, drawing the reader's attention from the comfortable evaluation of someone else's possible predisposition toward evil to the sudden confrontation of the possibility that such same evil may lie undetected (or consciously repressed) within our own being. Walk right through the belly of the beast - - frighteningly sharp image here, Annette. Really good stuff, as has become your knack. :) S

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Hans Vr 24 April 2017

Nice reflection about who we are, what we think and do and what becomes possible if we really get focused. Do we know ourselves? A superb question.

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Barry Middleton 23 April 2017

I think the important thing is to try to do our best. If we are doing that, anger and pain is usually moderated by our sincere desire to not do harm.

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Valsa George 20 April 2017

We are alien to ourselves. None can predict how we or another person would react to a particular stimulus! So we often go wrong in our evaluation of others! Some beastly impulses lie dormant within. Still with proper training, one can tame our impulses! A poem of great psychological relevance!

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Susan Williams 19 April 2017

You are very adept at putting your deep reflections into a poetic frame- - I am envious. It is not easy to write of psychological truths in this forum but you did it and you did it very well indeed. 10+

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Unwritten Soul 18 April 2017

Annette, i agree and i kinda can relate this thing to what i faced... Maybe it is too bad to be skeptical so i rather to neautralize all thoughts than judge...Anyway good write up and topic u chose to share here :)

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