Friday, November 2, 2012

Do U Miss Me Like The Way I Do? ? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Once in the winter dusk
I thought about u
All jokes of you
You made for me,
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Fatima Obaid
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Khalida Bano Ali 06 October 2014

A nice poem I liked it.

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Susan Lacovara 04 November 2013

Beautiful sentiments in your words...I. could feel the sorrow of your heart. I invite you to read my poem, While Out Walking A Winding Road, which has similar emotion. Continue to share your gift. I have been writing since I was a very young girl, and your poetry reminds me of my own yesterdays...PEACE

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Auwal Abdullahi 22 November 2012

Well done, Fatima! Keep writing-it makes perfect.

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Shivani Misra 03 November 2012

It should be 'AND searched for you'. Overall' this was a nice piece and beautiful to read.

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