Since you hear the notes you do write,
birds, leaves, wind, heavy shower, so how
come, they consider you a hearing impaired?
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I can hear the musing in your adrenalin induced piece.Excellent Joseph!
Ah Joseph, I wonder also from my vantage of age, whether people can hear the melodies pressing in my heart and can they see the things I see from all the years gone by. This poem expresses that thought so well and in such a literary way. Thanks for this one. Raynette
I noticed that one needs to be well prepared, in order to get all your references to different personages from the world's history and literature in some of your poems, though even by simple reading, just by the sound of words, the rhythm and the own way with words are perceivable. Best regards, onelia
lovely, but sad *pneumonia* part - captures the readers soul and heart
Dynamic with fantasy Peter Joseph
a master piece of your own, Joseph...this poem shows the depth of your reads and your insight into your writes... a ten for sure