Friday, September 12, 2008

Do They Hear? Comments

Rating: 4.8

Since you hear the notes you do write,
birds, leaves, wind, heavy shower, so how
come, they consider you a hearing impaired?
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Joseph S. Josephides
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Kesav Easwaran 30 November 2008

a master piece of your own, Joseph...this poem shows the depth of your reads and your insight into your writes... a ten for sure

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 October 2008

Ammmmazing thoughtful compact composition! .....10++++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 October 2008

I can hear the musing in your adrenalin induced piece.Excellent Joseph!

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Anjali Sinha 26 September 2008

lovely poem with celestial vibrations +10 regards anjalie

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Raynette Eitel 26 September 2008

Ah Joseph, I wonder also from my vantage of age, whether people can hear the melodies pressing in my heart and can they see the things I see from all the years gone by. This poem expresses that thought so well and in such a literary way. Thanks for this one. Raynette

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Koyel Mitra 26 September 2008

Lovely, educational poem.A 10!

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Onelia Avelar 25 September 2008

I noticed that one needs to be well prepared, in order to get all your references to different personages from the world's history and literature in some of your poems, though even by simple reading, just by the sound of words, the rhythm and the own way with words are perceivable. Best regards, onelia

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<font color =fusha>Amy 15 September 2008

lovely, but sad *pneumonia* part - captures the readers soul and heart

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Dynamic with fantasy Peter Joseph

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Joseph S. Josephides

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