Sunday, September 2, 2018

Do The Doody Dance!(Play Music With This, Your Choice) ....[ Inspired By A Poem By Kim Barney In A Poem Comment Kim Sent Me; S H O R T; Toilet Humor ] Comments

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Into the toilet I just did glance,
&, 'lo and behold', I saw a dance.
Two doodies danced, till they were dead.
They reminded me of old Ginger and of old Fred.
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Bri Edwards
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2018

Yes, doddies cannot throw doodies because they are hornless. They can play using their heads. You have talked about toilet. Cow-dung yard is toilet of cows and bulls. Doddies who have horns can throw cow-dung. Sometimes cows and bulls love to play in their toilet. Hornless cows and bulls also play but do not become able to throw. This is definitely an amazing sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2018

Hornless bulls and cows cannot through cow-dung. Only they can dance on it if they desire. Any way, although poets very rarely write toilet humor poems or do not like to write at all, still you have exceptionally written this in wise way. This expresses your intelligence. Although many may run away, still they may turn face to look a little.

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Bri Edwards 15 September 2018

ok, Kumarmani has now sent this in a message: Doddy (noun) according to Dictionary.com the meaning is, a cow or bull having no horns, especially an Aberdeen Angus. Doody (noun) : Doody is defined as a slang term for feces. In my comment I meant this, doddy in term to express hornless bull's or cow's dance ok, now i understand the reference to cows et al. and i think K., in his 2nd comment meant throw...dung. of course! one must have horns or hands to THROW IT! (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 15 September 2018

(cont.) BUT I used doody, so why are 'we' discussing cows? ? i did NOT know or use the word doddy, and i don't think Kim did either. ; ( hee-hee? so, doddies can not throw doodies? ? bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2018

Although you have written this poem expressing humor about toilet still the comment I give as following. Kim Barney's poems are lovely and these inspire many other poets too. Many swirl and twirl with amazing musical notes and the hornless bull or cow's dance is well performed. Humor expressed in this dance poem expresses your intelligence. An excellent poem is shared.Bulls and cows dance in cow-dung yard throwing cow-dung by horns. Hornless bulls and cows only dance on it.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 September 2018

Yak, Yak, Yak............How can one write a poem on such a subject? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! Please do not put the name 'dance' on it. Bri, Bri, Bri.........let me run from here. '

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2018

Kim Barney's poems are lovely and these inspire many other poets too. Many swirl and twirl with amazing musical notes and the doddy dance is well performed. Humor expressed in this dance poem expresses your intelligence. An excellent poem is shared here...10

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