Monday, June 15, 2015

Do Stay With Me Comments

Rating: 4.4

While mirthful breeze travels
To the unknown
Heavenly rays slowly glow
Soothing a soul, a soulful bliss
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Maia Padua
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Reynaldo Casison 14 August 2022

Sweet and tender poem

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Chinedu Dike 14 August 2022

A beautiful rendition of words. Congrats on your poem's selection as member POD.

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Bill Cantrell 03 December 2016

Tender emotions, gentle and warm...a wonderfully written poem!

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Kevin Patrick 01 December 2016

Elegant and ethereal, its very classical in its language and soothing to read. Congrats for poem of the day!

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Pamela Sinicrope 01 December 2016

Romantic and lovely. Congrats on poem of the day! :)

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Christina Simmons 01 December 2016

What a beautiful romantic poem so full with fantasy. We all know nothing last forever but this poem make it seems otherwise. I feel quite hopeful after reading your joyous words: - makes me all dreamy couple with nice thoughts and it being chosen for special poem.

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Seamus O Brian 01 December 2016

From the city of gentle people comes a gentle and beautiful poem. You have captured with your words that sway like the breeze an eternal sentiment of the human soul, to be loved faithfully and enduringly. This is a delightful piece of poetry, and one that deserves to be read time and again. For that reason, it is chosen well as the poem of the day. Bravo, fine poet!

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Clarence Prince 01 December 2016

You stay with me, Until twilight years, you stay with me! Lovely! ! !

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Beautiful poem..Thank you for sharing and congratulations..

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Gajanan Mishra 01 December 2016

good write, I like it, thank.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 December 2016

I've found my home! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Indira Renganathan 01 December 2016

Longing for the togetherness of love....beautiful...congratulations on the poet of the day- 10

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Partha Pratim Goswami 01 December 2016

Mind dances with aspiration of light...a morning kiss...a soulful bliss...every word I utter reciting this poem takes me somewhere unknown...great work...thanks for sharing

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 December 2016

Nice poem.... Congrats on being selected for the day....

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 December 2016

A marvelous presentation of tender feelings of love. Congrats on the member poem of the Day.

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Bharati Nayak 01 December 2016

n meadow’s soul I found my home And in mellow sundown show With its breeze blowing gently Until twilight years, you stay with me You stay with me In twilight and mornings’ way- - - - A wonderful love poem inspired by nature, Thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being Poet of the Day.

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Kim Barney 01 December 2016

Very nice poem. Congratulations for having it selected as member poem of the day!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2016

so nice.. i loved n liked..10 Improvise chain Will you come again? To relieve my pain And improvise chain I shall happy with change

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 June 2015

What a beautiful write! ! Loved it.Keep inking.

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