Thursday, September 13, 2012

Do Promise Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

If you wanna feel a poem,
I'll compose with rhythm.
But, do promise me
You'll pay respect to poetry.
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aung si myanmar
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 September 2012

so many condition to stay in the chest eternally! still nice to read! aung si!

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 16 September 2012

This is a delightful read, Aung Si. The I as the first person makes demands or wishes which are not so heavy to grant but it promises the second person, you, much greater things of much greater value.Keep on posting.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 16 September 2012

It is a very delightful read, dear Aung Si. The I as the first person character makes demands and conditions which are not difficult to fulfill but the I gives back to the second person character, you, greater things in return af much greater value. Keep on writing poems.

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Poetheart Morgan 14 September 2012

Aung, be sure that he sign with you that letter of love! ! ! ! Sweet your words! ! !

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Eindaray Kyaw 13 September 2012

I like this poem..style and meaning.. I wish.. may the one in your poem do promise you!

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Sunny Rose 13 September 2012

Last 2nd stanza about heart and using it sincerely is beautiful

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Asif Andalib 13 September 2012

Very beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 13 September 2012

This is good, because i can feel the truth and real feelings and emotion in this work. you draw it in a nice way well done.

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Philo Yan 13 September 2012

Trusting love, unconditional Love, . Requisites to everlasting love. Your poem has made it clear To whoever holds you dear.

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