Do Promise Me Comments

so many condition to stay in the chest eternally! still nice to read! aung si!

This is a delightful read, Aung Si. The I as the first person makes demands or wishes which are not so heavy to grant but it promises the second person, you, much greater things of much greater value.Keep on posting.

It is a very delightful read, dear Aung Si. The I as the first person character makes demands and conditions which are not difficult to fulfill but the I gives back to the second person character, you, greater things in return af much greater value. Keep on writing poems.

Aung, be sure that he sign with you that letter of love! ! ! ! Sweet your words! ! !

I like this poem..style and meaning.. I wish.. may the one in your poem do promise you!

Last 2nd stanza about heart and using it sincerely is beautiful

Very beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing

This is good, because i can feel the truth and real feelings and emotion in this work. you draw it in a nice way well done.

Trusting love, unconditional Love, . Requisites to everlasting love. Your poem has made it clear To whoever holds you dear.