Tuesday, August 9, 2005

Do Not Weep Comments

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Dry the tears from your eyes,
Do not weep no more.
Something good is on its way,
Many new things to explore.
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Terry Biscamp
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K Q 09 August 2005

I appreciate the spirit this poem was written in, but I must say I do disagree with: 'We should not wish for more than what we have'. I also find it contradictory with these lines: 'We must have hope and faith, /If in this life we want to succeed.' I do appreciate your effort.

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