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great poem....full of emotions mixed with love..thanks for shairng...sebastine

your love for this person is so powerful, the loss of her is killing you, this shows in all your writings

so dont let her go....b with her, as she wz with u since so many years....mothered u more than being love...dont let her go

great poem. take care

even though my life is a game, I feel that way... when my mom hurts me then says she is sorry over and over again. good job. Crystal

Great poem shows true heartfelt emotion good effort :)

i also feel like if my mom really cares about me u know..... nice work

The emotion shines through this poem Gary.. well used words...thank you....xx

Gary, I feel your pain in this poem