Do Not Try Comments

My patience has improved My pride has been toned You won't rule over my mood Most of the time I feel good. You are portraying a reality in human relationship. thank you very much. tony

nice blend of internal rhyme, .. just remember, patience is a treasure. Hello po.. :)

My God! Full of fury! I agree with Poetheart Morgan. :)

from time to time our patience get tried. just don't push the lady too far. nice write

Direct and cuttingly strong. Go girl!

Good original write or raw emotions an anger.

Hey don't let go of your reigns, you will regret it. Hang in there

I think someone is in trouble here! ! ! ! Very well done Poetess.

Somebody is trying your patients, but being patient is a virtue.