Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Do Not Tell My Lover, That I Have Feelings For Another Comments

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Do not tell my lover
That I have feelings for another
Fair like my maiden, there is no other
But to my stress I must confess
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Gabriel Joel
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Kyle Shield Laster 22 December 2009

very good write. so glad u took an interest in my poem 'The Same Damn Day'. i could help u edit ure work if ud like... uve made small grammatical errors in a few pieces of ures that ive read.. but they don't take away from the power of ure poetry. u really r very good and uve got tons of potential. keep it up! -killy

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