Do Not Tell Me Comments

This is a touching story, my friend, very natural and written straight from the heart. It's a sad romance but very well penned as always.: -)

This beautifully written poem simply flows and unfolds a beautiful love story, that is in the winds of change. As usual, you entrance me with your words. 10 Karin Anderson

I love your poems, this one is brilliant

Bittersweet farewell. I agree with Cindy, its a powerful poem about the pain and drama of breaking up. Thank you for sharing :)

Very well written this Laurie - has all the pain and drama, a story of a breakup absolutely powerful with grim determination. Very sad though....

Another heart felt write, wonderful imagery, nice flow, A great depth of emotion.Beautiful, you Brits sure can write poetry I love it, a 10

Excellent flowing write filled with strength...liking the last two lines...10+

I like the way you have written this Laurie, a flowing piece written from the heart, 10 Lynda xx