Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Do Not Tell Me….. Do Not Promise Me Comments

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Do not tell me how my beauty fails in comparison to the moon,
Or how my smile out shines the brightest stars.

Do not tell me that we will be together forever,
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Brooke Mcminn 26 March 2010

I love this poem! I really liked the part 'Do not promise me the jewels of the Nile, Nor the pearls of the deep blue sea, Just promise me you will always Be there for me.' That is such a beautiful paragraph, really calming and peaceful, but full of comand at the same time. Very good work!

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