Friday, November 13, 2009

Do Not Take With Seconal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Holding your hand, but not too tight,
I might still want you to fly.
Reading your name as it’s carved on my wrist,
Only a scar like a useless white lie.
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Christopher's Dead
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Very nice poem. 'break my heart now, or give me back my girl' I like your ultimatum there at the end. keep writing.

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Christopher's Dead

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