Do Not Regret... Comments

Tsira, as always so well written. The Drean Sparrow what a great idea. The true free spirit. It's a great write that I really enjoyed.

Your beautiful dream sparrow...a metaphor for the creative spirit, perhaps...one must not regret the giving of one's self away in words. Exceptional, Tsira. Love, SandraX

The sparrow, a daily dream come true.10/10 regards Tom

This poem reflects a feeling about something shifty, uncontrollable, indefinite in a sky full set.

Amazing.....eloquent..........fine imagery.....10+

The ordinary and plain sparrow has dreams of colour, a great poem Tsira. Best wishes, Andrew

Wow...........excellent writesTsira! Its like a dream within a dream...........^_^

colorful thought of sparrow in words,10

This is so lovely Tsira, the dream sparrow, well penned 10 Lynda xx

so simple, simple indeed; yet so powerful - do not regret her, for she's so true, the sparrow has a dream not a bird of passge, no. simple and powerful and beautiful, Tsira.