Saturday, August 2, 2008

Do Not Leave Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

My sweetie please do not leave me alone
do not leave me all-day weep and moan
My sweetie just look me in the eyes
you think i am telling lies like the other guys.
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aziz soubai
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Little Hatila ;) 28 September 2008

i hope she will never leave you...coz leaving and departure is the hardest thing that everyone are going through in their lives....well done i give 10 Hataw

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Ency Bearis 13 August 2008

nicely expressed desperately..good write.. Ency Bearis

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Brian Hinckley 04 August 2008

Very good, I enjoyed this one.

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Annie Stotts 02 August 2008

this is a really good poems better than mine

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