Friday, December 16, 2005

Do Not Judge Me On The Entrance Comments

Rating: 5.0

do not judge me on my entrance.
only judge me on the exit,
first impressions are only for the lazy minds,
take the time to indulge in me,
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***** ********* 16 December 2005

A beautiful yet tragic love poem Vincent. I say tragic, because I think all lovers hope for that joined departure. We all secretly crave it, but the fact is that it rarely happens that way. The premise that we should judge a the end of our relationship, rather than the beginning, so one to think on. This poem of yours brought a tear, so 10 from Tai

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Amanda Lukas 16 December 2005

That was beautiful...

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