Saturday, April 4, 2015

Do Not Go Sweetheart Comments

Rating: 4.9

Night is still left,
Do not go sweetheart,
I love your theft!
What else you want?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2022

A sweet poem... loved the delightful poetic expression dear poet

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Chinedu Dike 08 June 2017

It touched my heart. A sublime depiction of the voyage of pure bliss that is love, lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Jawal.

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Valsa George 05 April 2015

What more remains to be shared I wonder! ! You Highpriest of love, you are at your creative best in your love poems!

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Rajnish Manga 05 April 2015

It is so sweet and cute. The lover has given away all his assets- the soul, the heart and the self - to his muse and is now willing to sacrifice his life. What a beautiful romantic poem. Thanks, Sir.

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 April 2015

An amazing ode..............................10

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