Monday, June 20, 2011

Do Not Despise Me Comments

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Do not despise me, for my love is true,
You are the apple of my eye.
My lonely heart beats just for you,
Without your love, I'd surely die.
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Juan Olivarez
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 20 June 2011

Simple yet captivating. Great rhythmic flow with vivid imagery.10 for it. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A preacher without practice' on page 3.

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