Do Not Count Poem by Zyw Zywa

Do Not Count

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A sphinx in the desert grabs my feet

.....What is small, soft and weak
.....but stronger than the hardest marble?

.....Do not count on what you have learned
.....do not count on what you think now
.....do not count on what you will know later

.....but surrender to the answer
.....or burn alive in the sun!

The standing heat and my resistance
against this exam dehydrate me

I lick the salt from my lips
fold my hands over my head
until they sting and get exhausted

my sweat evaporates
my skin is bursting
sand fills the slits

I dream of drops
that close me
one by one, slowly

making a way deep
into my fibres, and the sphinx nods
She releases me

.....Here's a roof
.....here's a well
.....take a rest and move on

Saturday, January 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance,riddle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Collection "I am"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 26 January 2019

Nicely articulated portrayal of one's negative feelings. But there's hope at the end of it. Thanks for sharing.

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Zywa Zywa 26 January 2019

hope..... because the answer to the riddle is in the experience

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