Sunday, January 12, 2014

Do Not Cloud Your Mind With Sorrow Comments

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You must repair from love
You must repair from loss
From death
You need to breathe
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Lyn Paul
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Londizwi Shezi 22 April 2015

Wow that was a brilliant poem there Lyn

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 January 2014

Beautiful poem Lyn. Very true said Do not cloud your mind with sorrow.. Overcome pain and loss....Only hope in tomorrow can make us do so. Loved reading it.

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Mighty in motivation and powerful in philosophy! Well done my friend!

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Hazel Durham 16 January 2014

Beautiful poem, with such wisdom to know that time will bring new hope and experiences to take away the pain and hold it as a candle of the light that was part and still is your life!

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Valerie Dohren 15 January 2014

Beautiful Lyn, very good and wise advice. We all experience sorrow in life, but life goes on and time heals - mostly.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 January 2014

so warmly inspiring Lyn that it heals the hurting times I'm passing through. great write indeed.

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Amitava Sur 13 January 2014

Very well said, ultimately the sorrows & pains does not beget any thing in return excepting drowning the body & mind in a fearful abyss. Lyn you gave a nice guide line.

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