Monday, October 26, 2009

Do Not Clip My Wings Comments

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Gossamer wings
Intricate rings
Interwoven dreams
And sighs within!
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jyoti saxena
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Jyoti. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 October 2009

They are the wings of love, wings of 'Bhakti'. No 'Shakti' can clip them......fly! fly my friend into His love-garden........wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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rago rago 26 October 2009

certainly little queen.........your wings are not clipped.........fly high like an eagle and like a vulture you never ponder on the dead ones.........

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