Do not ask why
When earth's sky
Becomes red in shy
And glows with the touch
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Do not ask me If I miss a heart-beat Reading this poem, And wonder why. Well done dear poet.
Bharati, in this poem you address something I’ve thought about but never attempted directly in poetry, that is the progamming or chemistry within us that is intrinsic to us. Why indeed am I drawn or attracted? Though I can describe what it feels like I can no more explain its origins than a bee can explain why it is drawn to flowers. —And you accomplish this with delightful simplicity. -Glen
Thank you Glen Kappy for your valuable comment. Love is the most natural feeling common to all living beings.We do not have an explanation why we feel so.Nice to get your comment after a long time.
Natural rules, Natural Laws! Nature, Love and Life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
When a person is in the mesmerizing touch of love, he/ she behaves in such a way that cannot be rationalized or explained as in normal situations! Love sometimes makes one intoxicated or excited far beyond words! Spring is an ideal season to be hit by Cupid's arrows! Lovely ink!
I ask.not say not why Because.you said it Thanks for sharing
Most wonderful and beautiful poem mam.I felt happy myself after read this poem. Nice poem.
Thank you Bhagabat Prasad Hotta for reading and appreciating my poems.
Very nice poem Bharati, I sense a different style from your other poems. Very very good verse.
Some of the intriguing mysteries embedded in the nature have been pinpointed along with magical spells cast by them on the universe. Thanks for sharing.
One idiot prompted me with wrong information to mercilessly torture an innocent fellow. .pl don't commit the mistake I made out of wrong judgment.
Flowers dance with rhythm and sky motivates mind with great pleasure at dawn and dusk with changing colours. We hear the moon's call and feel the breath. We feel every moment with great enthusiasm. Spring brings love for all and colorful panorama motivates mind. Holi is celebrated with great pleasure during this season. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10
Thank you Sir For your excellent review on the poem.I am grateful for your kind read and appreciation.
A wonderful poem dear poetess. Loved the lucidity of poetic expression. Top score and to my favourite.