Friday, March 22, 2019

Do Notask Why Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do not ask why
When earth's sky
Becomes red in shy
And glows with the touch
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Bharati Nayak
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2022

A wonderful poem dear poetess. Loved the lucidity of poetic expression. Top score and to my favourite.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 May 2019

Do not ask me If I miss a heart-beat Reading this poem, And wonder why. Well done dear poet.

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Bharati Nayak 21 May 2019

A delightful poetic response to my poem.Thank you Sir.

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Glen Kappy 02 April 2019

Bharati, in this poem you address something I’ve thought about but never attempted directly in poetry, that is the progamming or chemistry within us that is intrinsic to us. Why indeed am I drawn or attracted? Though I can describe what it feels like I can no more explain its origins than a bee can explain why it is drawn to flowers. —And you accomplish this with delightful simplicity. -Glen

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Bharati Nayak 02 April 2019

Thank you Glen Kappy for your valuable comment. Love is the most natural feeling common to all living beings.We do not have an explanation why we feel so.Nice to get your comment after a long time.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2019

Natural rules, Natural Laws! Nature, Love and Life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 24 March 2019

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis for your kind appreciation.

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Valsa George 24 March 2019

When a person is in the mesmerizing touch of love, he/ she behaves in such a way that cannot be rationalized or explained as in normal situations! Love sometimes makes one intoxicated or excited far beyond words! Spring is an ideal season to be hit by Cupid's arrows! Lovely ink!

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Bharati Nayak 24 March 2019

Thank you Madam for reading my poem and giving your lovely comment.

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Sekharan Pookkat 24 March 2019

I ask.not say not why Because.you said it Thanks for sharing

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Bharati Nayak 24 March 2019

Thank you Sekharan Pookkat for your kind read and nice comment.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 23 March 2019

Most wonderful and beautiful poem mam.I felt happy myself after read this poem. Nice poem.

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Bharati Nayak 23 March 2019

Thank you Bhagabat Prasad Hotta for reading and appreciating my poems.

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C F 22 March 2019

Very nice poem Bharati, I sense a different style from your other poems. Very very good verse.

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Bharati Nayak 22 March 2019

Thank you Chito Faustino for your appreciation.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 March 2019

Some of the intriguing mysteries embedded in the nature have been pinpointed along with magical spells cast by them on the universe. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 22 March 2019

Many thanks, Sir, for reading my poem and your wonderful comment.

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mistake.... 22 March 2019

One idiot prompted me with wrong information to mercilessly torture an innocent fellow. .pl don't commit the mistake I made out of wrong judgment.

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God bless 22 March 2019

Bharati, concentrate on writing don't be a party to an idiot

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2019

Flowers dance with rhythm and sky motivates mind with great pleasure at dawn and dusk with changing colours. We hear the moon's call and feel the breath. We feel every moment with great enthusiasm. Spring brings love for all and colorful panorama motivates mind. Holi is celebrated with great pleasure during this season. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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Bharati Nayak 22 March 2019

Thank you Sir For your excellent review on the poem.I am grateful for your kind read and appreciation.

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