Do Me The Favor Comments
At night,
The curtains are still,
But my candle flame keeps dancing to a strong wind;
The curtains are still,
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I particularly like the elements of poetry you put into use in this poem, the alternating 'So' and 'But' at the end of each stanza, the alternating rhyme in the So stanza and the two end line rhymes in But stanzas, it's real cool. I agree with you, If Mr. or Ms. Ghost Phantom doesn't do you the favour, no one would believe your story, 'coz your experience is beyond fantasy or daydreaming. nice one,10.
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7/21/2025 12:56:56 AM # 1.0.0
nice but kinda sad poem.. keep writing :)