Kindly do me a favor
while you're still ahead...
Spare me cliches of undying love
even after I'm dead.
...
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A very true and pure desire of need of love irrespective of the upcomings. Indeed the humankind cant predict any of the happenings in the future so the present moment must be enjoyed even in cases of true love.....10/10
just love me here and now. Don't think too much about it; I will show you how............................ soul when immortal by audacity heart yet riffles by hope of love...............quite passionate by audacity of hope, heart still needs love ingenious, beautiful way of expression,10++++, thanks for sharing
A moving and touching one indeed....i felt every line..you kept the poignant aspect through out..nice one Roshi with lots of love shan
A very refreshing love poem indeed Roshni.....it deals with the here and now instead of those standard emotional outpourings..10++++++++
Truly, Roshni, one of the best love poems I've read in recent times. Too many love poems deal with tired old ideas and cliches and your poem goes straight to the point.
Rightly said, True love doesn't need material things. Nice