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Seen by 11 Les Bush Poet likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1 Gyan Vatika and Rajneesh Garg like this.
Hossein Kh likes this. Hemani Nilesh Thank you mota bhai, one should act properly..25 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Mehta Sir, a beautiful rhyming poem with a wonderful story to enjoy! Thanks! Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Jun 29,2013
loved it! Nicely expressed with a valuable message.... Padmavathi, Secunderabad Jun 29,2013 Gurjeet Singh likes this. Susan E Birch likes this.
Live Peace Woodstock we send our greetings from Woodstock New York. Peace to you Hasmukh 14 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 Bobby Karmakar likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
10 people like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome sarabjeet, nagendr, ajesh, krishna jha, sanny, yogesh, prashant, naveed, pradeep n md shimul... all welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Edna Gazzingan Roaquin Nice story 9 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1
4 people like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome malik, veronica, vekoob n edna a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1 Live Peace Woodstock that spiral can be seen in so many sacred places around the world 8 hours ago · Like · 1
Seen by 5 2 people like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome laurence and live peace a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1 2 people like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome kuldip n k singh a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Ma Lucille Manuel Hasmukh Mehta Namaste! Thank you for the wisdom you impart in your poetry, sir. Dhanyawad! about an hour ago · Like
Lee Jennings A celebration of virtue! Thank you! Well said. about an hour ago · Like
Mehta Sir, a beautiful rhyming poem with a wonderful story to enjoy! Thanks! Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Jun 29,2013
I loved it! Nicely expressed with a valuable message.... Padmavathi, Secunderabad Jun 29,2013
I loved it! Nicely expressed with a valuable message.... Padmavathi, Secunderabad Jun 29,2013
Some Girl Nicely written ~ positive action with others in mind :)
A nice moral story beautifully re-told. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Jun 29,2013
Dear Sir, your work is so simple, lucid and has good message. it is beautifully crafted. keep it up. Udaya Kumar Mohapatra, New Delhi Jun 29,2013
Dear Hasmukhbhai. With a little change you could make it a religious poem. May I do some modifications with your kind permission? Original poem - Then came churchman rushing with no care He waned to open gate and was with worry His leg struck stone and quickly was on ground 'All careless people here and are around' Modified poem - Then came a churchman rushing with religious care He wanted to open the heaven's gate with joy rare His leg struck stone and quickly was on ground In the kingdom of heaven himself he found KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 58134329,2013
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