Monday, May 17, 2010

Do I Weep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do I weep, Do I weep of the visions that I do desperately seek, or do I weep from all the nightmares that come to me while I sleep.

Do I weep, Do I weep of all the things I cant do, or do I weep of the lies I have been told that wont ever come true.
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Lynn Glover 16 July 2010

A very fine poem and as I read it I was swept up into the weeping as though it had all happened to me. That's what a good poet does, draws the reader into his work with him Very good. Lynn. I give you a 10 for poem, rhythem, structure and meaning.

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Eddie Rodgers

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