Thursday, January 21, 2021

Do I Please Them? Comments

Rating: 4.8

Is my smile wide enough?
Can it impress my personality onto you
Even though it may be suppressed
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April DOWN
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 08 February 2022

I smiled, I sought and I's stranger at all- superbly crafted the poem; I enjoyed

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 February 2022

An interesting and well expressed poem. Congratulations! !

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Mahinda Abeysinghe 08 February 2021

This reminds me Elenor Rigby by Beatles. Interesting depict of the modern society.

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David Wood 08 February 2021

This seems to be the way society is going. You are very perceptive.5*

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Lyn Paul 07 February 2021

Your smile is wide enough along with your heart.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 February 2021

Congratulatuions on being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! Thank you so much for sharing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 February 2021

Excellent poem so well worded. Very fascinating to read time and again.5 Stars! Amazingly created.

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Chima Ononogbu 22 January 2021

Really exciting, and even more reflective. Just beautiful. Thanks April.

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Kostas Lagos 21 January 2021

Enjoyed reading this well written poem

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