Do I have to live
In a destroyed cave
For the sake of life
Which is not safe?
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yeah girl u have to live like every1 else...... btw great poem! ! i loved it... 10 frm me cheers regards broken heart
Yes you really av to live.you are talented. the poem is really realistic.the composition is good THANKS FOR SHARING.
You are talented girl this poem an other great write, for peace.......world must be a safe haven for life........
do i have to repeat myself saying ur a talented girl :) ? seems yes i do and thats my pleasure. the poem is sth else, as usual out of many others... u have to be strong, for the Glory goes straight to u, and it eats hearts of weak-will ppl. God be with u, Luwi
OK Luwi, here goes. You don't have to agree with my opinions. First, you ask very important questions that you can answer best. The problem with rhyming is that it sometimes seems forced. You might investigate free verse, which can be more flexible, even more powerful if handled right. I don't know how much freedom you have to answer your questions truthfully. We all have to grow where we're planted. :)
Do I have to hate As long as I don`t have any fate Also no body allow me to rate Even for a current date? ? ? really a lovely and sweet poem...10/10
I love the ending of the poem, Luwi.. :) Strong idea well expressed, thanks for sharing. A.
i like this one Luwi, I guess we are always asking these sorts of questions.
I agree with whats said here, you are a talented girl and world must be a safe haven for life. regards N&N