Monday, January 21, 2008

Do I Go Or Do I Stay? Comments

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Hear the phone ring
I check the number
It’s you
I don’t answer
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beautifully broken xxx
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Francis Duggan 23 January 2008

Beautiful poem this one Tash so much feeling in these lines excellent work

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Mz.Honesty Only 22 January 2008

DAMN...this is amazing. You dont know how much our poems relate. Check out some of mines. Especially 'Boy should I? '.'The real me....'and 'Have you ever felt like..' there's more but tell me what you think.

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